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Competition Showcase – An English Rose by Yvonne Higgins

 

About Yvonne Higgins
Happily married with two grown up children, and living in Sutton Coldfield, Yvonne Higgins retired from working in the the finance sector twelve months ago, on health grounds.
‘I stumbled upon a local creative writing class three years ago,’ she says. ‘And I haven’t looked back since. The class rekindled my love of words and when it finished, I didn’t want to. I joined a local writing group - the Boldwriters, who meet regularly to share stories and offer encouragement. We produce an Anthology of short stories each year, for family and friends.
‘I am currently working on two adventure novels, targeted at a young teenage audience and a centennial history for a local club. I was delighted to be awarded second prize for my writing. Spurred on by this, I shall now set my sights on the magazine market.
‘I love beginning with a blank screen, letting my imagination steer my fingers over the keyboard and with patience, finding that I have given birth to a story.’

AN ENGLISH ROSE
By Yvonne Higgins




‘Thank you so much for giving up your valuable time to join me this evening, in what I must say is the finest day I can remember since I ran behind my old Dad asking him when I could taste one of his little green tomatoes.’ The joke was old, but true.
This was to be the first new wine introduced out of Robert’s small vineyard in the last twenty years. It was a real milestone for Robert, who had taken over the small wine producing company from his father. The new grape was the result of years of struggle, persistence, and sheer dedication.
‘And I am so happy to be sharing this moment with my darling daughter, Rosie. What more appropriate name could I ever have given her?’
She smiled fondly across at her father. She knew how hard he had been working to get everything ready in time for the launch. Final exams at university had prevented her from helping him finalise the promotion, but she had promised not to miss his big day and had arrived just in time.
Rosie was so proud of her father, but a small knot in the pit of her stomach threatened to spoil the moment. What was coming next?
Sure enough, as though on cue, Robert Johnson looked across at his only daughter and beckoned her to join him.
‘C’mon lass, don’t be shy.’
Hesitantly she made her way forward. As she approached him she noticed dark circles visible under his eyes, and a new frailness to him. The hours he had put in over the last few months had certainly taken their toll. But when he looked at her and smiled, his whole face lit up and for a moment she saw again the Daddy who would swing her in his strong arms; the one who used to make her mother giggle like a young girl.
‘I’m not getting any younger, as many of you will know, and so I wanted this new venture to represent a fresh start. I have decided to embrace retirement; it’s a good thing I have someone I trust to pass the business over to. I will be making an official announcement, just as soon as the paperwork is completed.’
Rosie’s heart did a lurch. The rest of the evening was a blur as she struggled to maintain a happy face. By the end of the evening she had decided she must give up on her own dream, to concentrate all her efforts on making her Dad proud. She would do this by keeping the family business going.
She knew every detail of the new crop, from the planting, right through to picking. She knew the processes involved in bringing the grape to maturity at just the right moment. An unexpected rainstorm had threatened everything, but the locals had rallied round and the grapes had been saved.
From a young age, Robert had made sure that his daughter was schooled in the art of wine. A respected connoisseur himself, he had spent hours schooling Rosie on the fermentation process. As a teenager she would help with the filtering and bottling. Then when she was older, Robert had encouraged her to taste wine, to learn the importance of serving temperatures, the ageing process, how to identify different tastes on the palate.
The trouble was, her heart wasn’t in it. She had tried so hard to be the daughter that Robert wanted; even more so, when her mother had died suddenly in a car crash when she was only thirteen. It was his vision. But it wasn’t hers. And now, in his proudest moment, she needed to find some way to tell him the truth.
Growing up in the country had encouraged Rosie’s love of animals. All manner of injured creatures and strays were taken in and cared for. Even at university where they weren’t allowed any pets, she had cared for an injured mouse she had found under the stairs and a timid hedgehog who returned to their small garden each winter to hibernate.
Today she had bid a tearful farewell to the small band of student friends she had bonded with over the last four years. They all had jobs lined up, careers to begin. She had all the necessary skills and knowledge to work in the wine industry, but none of the commitment.
Her long legs carried her forward as she moved slowly away from the podium; aware that all eyes were fixed on her. Close friends and a good many prospective buyers had been invited. She didn’t have the heart to ruin her father’s day of triumph.
‘This is a damn fine specimen, Rosie’ said Mr Gifford, one of the buyers from overseas. ‘Nice delicate fruity finish, with a complex bouquet of redcurrant and rose petal. I particularly like that tiny aftertaste of cinnamon as it hits the back of the throat. You can be assured that we will be making a regular order for our clients.’
Rosie nodded and thanked him.
‘You’re a bit quiet tonight’ said a voice close to her ear. Rosie turned and found Geoff standing behind her. She was very fond of Geoff. Ten years her senior, he was like the older brother she never had. Geoff had come to work for her father from the age of sixteen, when both his parents had emigrated to Australia. He loved the business; had a keen appreciation for the science of winemaking. He was the reason she had been able to go to university in the first place. Although she helped out in the holidays, back at home Geoff was indispensable.
‘Did you approve of your father’s choice for the name?’ he asked.
Rosie glanced at the bottles stacked up on show. There it was for all to see – Roseanna Rosé. She wiped away a tear which threatened to escape, and nodded her head.
‘And you’re ok about your Dad’s decision on the business?’
‘Yes of course, why wouldn’t I be?’ Rosie lied.
‘That’s a relief then. I don’t suppose he will ever let go of the reins entirely, but maybe now he will get to travel a bit. That’s the one thing he told me he regrets not doing more of when your Mum was alive.’
They hadn’t had proper holidays when Rosie was growing up. She vaguely remembered a couple of weekends away at the seaside. But most of the time the three of them would climb aboard Dad’s old Range Rover and just take off somewhere for the day. Invariably they ended up visiting another vineyard, or if there was a wine tasting event somewhere, he wouldn’t be able to resist. It was a standing joke with the family.
‘Maybe he will take himself off to California or Italy?’ suggested Rosie.
Geoff picked up on the theme and laughed out loud. ‘I shouldn’t be at all surprised.’
Later that evening when Geoff was busy tidying up, father and daughter sat down together for the first time since Rosie had got back home. All the guests had left.
‘Sorry if I gave you a bit of a shock about the retirement thing, Rosie. It’s just something I have been thinking about for a while now. I know I can’t go on at this pace forever. My health’s not been so good lately and the doc suggested I take it a bit easier.’
‘It’s ok Dad, I’ve finished uni now and I can devote all of my time to the business.’
Robert looked hard at his daughter. ‘That’s not what you want to do, though is it love?’
The question was a gentle one. Geoff stood at the doorway looking slightly unsure about whether to stay or go.
‘As you said, you need to take things a bit steadier now, maybe take yourself off for one of those long holidays you have always promised yourself. I know the ropes and Geoff is here to help me if I need him.’
‘And what about what you want?’ prompted Robert. ‘I’ve seen the way you are with injured and sick animals. It’s how I was with the wine business. It’s in your blood. You can’t help yourself.’
Rosie went to say something, but Robert put his hand on top of his daughter’s.
‘I’ve known for some time that you won’t take over from me. That’s why I’ve been training young Geoff up. I’ve asked him to take over from me when I retire. Of course I want you to have a share in the business, but as a sleeping partner only. Geoff will run the day to day stuff and we are going to take on a couple more people to help him. I want you to decide what you want out of life and go for it. You have my blessing.’
Rosie couldn’t believe it. Trust her Dad to know what she felt in her heart. She felt a surge of love threaten to engulf her.
‘You’re ok with this then Rosie?’ asked Geoff, who had decided he needed to say something.
‘Ok, I’m more than ok. Come here both of you and let me give you a hug.’
The three embraced and Robert shook Geoff’s hand.
‘Do you know’ said Robert, ‘I think this calls for a celebration. Pass me one of those bottles of Roseanna Red, will you Geoff?’
‘Dad, if you don’t mind, can I have a cup of tea instead?’ Rosie asked, rather sheepishly.
‘TEA, she wants TEA’ shouted Robert in mock horror. ‘Go on then lass, fetch yourself a mug of tea and we will toast to the future.’
Five minutes later the three stood together.
‘Here’s to Roseanna Wines – and here’s to our Rosie’ said Robert as two wine glasses and one steaming mug were raised in unison.


Judging comment
Should a short story always have a happy ending? Certainly Yvonne Higgins serves up a happy ending in her story that took second place in the Writers’ News Wine Buff short story competition.
Many writers argue that short story readers are looking for entertainment, they want to take pleasure from their stories and a happy ending completes their enjoyment.
But others believe that an ending should be appropriate and fitting rather than happy. It should tie up all the loose ends, should show how the central character has resolved the problems posed in the story, but need not necessarily be happy.
There is, of course, no single correct answer in this debate. The short story writer should create whatever kind of ending they find most satisfying and relevant. But there are a few rules, and one is that the ending should not go over the top.
Let us take Yvonne Higgins’ story as an example. It would have been possible to create a romantic relationship between Rosie and Geoff at the end. That way, Rosie would have been free to pursue her chosen career, Geoff would have got the promotion hedeserved, and they would live together happily ever after. That would be a happy ending for you – but it would be just too much, too perfect, over the top. So, wisely, Yvonne, stopped short of this degree of overkill.