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Competition Showcase – A Ghost's Craving by Jenna Warren

This section of the website showcases stories by Writing Magazine competition runners-up.

The Summer Ghost Story Competition was won by Joanne Ford, whose winning story appears in this month’s Writing Magazine. Here we publish the runner-up by Jenna Warren

The judging comments are on the last page
Previous Showcase stories:
Fate of an idol, Shaun Avery
A New Beginning, Annette Linstead
Ruby Cell, Richard Fox
No Angel
, Christine Sutton
Greater Love
, Dawn Bush
Collision
, Fran Tracey
The Tortoiseshell Comb, Malcolm Welshman
Dr Murdo's Walking Stick, by Sara Lee

Jenna is currently in my third year as an undergraduate Theatre Studies student. When she has completed her course, she hopes to begin studying for a Masters degree.
She has been writing stories since she was a child, and spends much of her spare time writing: ‘I particularly enjoy writing fantasy and comic stories,’ she says.
This is the first time she has won a prize for her writing.

A Ghost's Craving

by

Jenna Warren

Mark and Julia had been married for thirty summers, and each one of these thirty summers had included a holiday in the countryside. They particularly enjoyed visiting stately homes, especially the kind that served cream teas in their cafés. It was the promise of a cream tea that brought them to Bluefield Hall for the first time.
Bluefield Hall was an attractive building dating from the late eighteenth century. It boasted a sunny little courtyard where visitors could enjoy refreshments in the open air.
After a brief tour of the house, Mark and Julia went into the tiny café to order their creamy indulgence.
‘Two cream teas, please,’ said Julia.
The young man behind the counter looked at them anxiously. ‘Are you sure you wouldn’t like to try today’s special? It’s chocolate fudge cake with vanilla ice cream…’
‘No, thank you,’ said Julia.
‘But it’s very good...’

‘We’ll stick with the cream teas,’ said Mark.
‘Oh,’ said the man. ‘Are you sure?’
‘Quite sure,’ said Julia.
Without another word, the young man retreated into the kitchen.
‘Funny lad,’ said Mark.
They went into the courtyard and sat down at a table.
A short time later the young man reappeared, carrying a tray in his trembling hands. He served the cream teas without meeting the eyes of his customers, and then returned to the café as quickly as possible.
The couple barely noticed his odd behaviour this time. They were too busy staring at the scones. They were the biggest they had ever seen, and looked absolutely delicious.
‘Much better than chocolate fudge cake,’ chuckled Julia.
A light wind found its way into the courtyard and blew a napkin from Julia’s plate. Mark bent to retrieve it.
‘Shame about that wind,’ Julia said. She cut into her scone and smeared both halves with jam and cream. Mark did the same.
There was a low groaning sound from somewhere close by.
‘What was that?’ said Mark.
They looked around. An old man had entered the courtyard and sat down at a table in the corner, but he did not look capable of making such a noise. It had not exactly sounded human.


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