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Competition Showcase – Bearing Up by Judith Williams

After tea, Marian decided to have one last try. This time, three rings and a voice said ‘Hello?’ Marian’s heart gave an extra beat. She really hadn’t been expecting an answer.
‘Hello, it’s Mrs Smithers. I’ve been waiting all day.’
‘Waiting? What for?’
That was silly. She felt suddenly cross. ‘For you to start painting my bungalow, of course.’ What else would she have been waiting for? Christmas?
‘Me? Joe Thomson?’
‘Yes. I paid you fifty pounds for the paint.’
There was an awkward silence on the end of the line, only it wasn’t a line, was it? However much was she paying for the call? ‘Look, can you tell me when you will come?’
‘I’ll be round in a minute,’ he said. ‘What’s the address?’
‘You know it. You came to give me an estimate.’
‘Just remind me,’ he said, so she did.
This time he came. It was more like ten minutes, but then the doorbell chimed. She turned on the porch light and peered through the peep hole. That was odd. He wasn’t a lad in jeans, but a man with grey hair and navy overalls just like Bill’s, the ones she had just thrown away. Her eyes filled with tears, and he had to wait in the porch whilst she blew her nose.


‘Mrs Smithers? Joe Thomson. Can I come in?’
She wasn’t sure what to do. She knew it was foolish to let strange men into her home. He seemed nice enough, but then murderers often did, so people said. Oh well, did she mind being murdered? Just so long as he didn’t burgle her funeral money. She stepped aside, and in he came, pausing to wipe his boots on the mat. Couldn’t be a burglar, she decided.
He sat down on the settee, and waited until she was settled.
‘The chap who came before, what did he look like?’
‘A young lad in jeans, nice looking, scruffy brown hair. Said he would start on Monday - today - and three hundred pounds for the lot, in magnolia and white.’
‘And you gave him fifty quid?’
‘Yes, to buy the paint.’
He ran a hand over his face, looking as if he too was going to cry. ‘I’m really sorry, truly I am. Can’t do anything with the lad, not since his Gran died.’
Light slowly dawned on Marian. ‘It was your grandson who answered your phone? He had paint on his boots. Does he work for you?’
Joe nodded. ‘Well, he’s supposed to, and lives with us too - with me, I mean. I can’t seem to rely on him nowadays. But I’ve never known him do anything like this before, asking people for money. I never do, not until the job’s finished.’


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